har baar kuchh naya dekhne aata hoon yahan aur nazar isi poem par chali jati hai. I dont know what to say bout this poem but aisa lagta hai roz kuchh likhoon to bhi is poem ke liye kuchh zaahir nahin kar paunga.Padhta hoon to lagta hai jaise feel kar raha hoon sab.
at first sight i thought its name should be SOUL as this dillema runs with the life. the body remains scred that soul would leave it and vice versa.they live a full life together but they miss something.perhaps the real life.
Then I thought its name could be PATCH as it is a situation of each and everyone's life. everyone lives with a patch.
sach to yeh hai phool ka dil bhi chhalni hai Hansta chehra ek bahana lagta hai.
I wish i will write something like this poem someday(I swear)
3 comments:
one of the best poem on this blog.
the reality of life is expressed in very simple words.
good nidhi
har baar kuchh naya dekhne aata hoon yahan aur nazar isi poem par chali jati hai. I dont know what to say bout this poem but aisa lagta hai roz kuchh likhoon to bhi is poem ke liye kuchh zaahir nahin kar paunga.Padhta hoon to lagta hai jaise feel kar raha hoon sab.
at first sight i thought its name should be SOUL as this dillema runs with the life. the body remains scred that soul would leave it and vice versa.they live a full life together but they miss something.perhaps the real life.
Then I thought its name could be PATCH as it is a situation of each and everyone's life. everyone lives with a patch.
sach to yeh hai phool ka dil bhi chhalni hai
Hansta chehra ek bahana lagta hai.
I wish i will write something like this poem someday(I swear)
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