i know thats your first triveni and you know maine bahut kam hi logon ki first triveni itni achhi dekhi hai..
Aisa kitni hi baar hota hai dhaai akshar ke maayne badal jate hain...aur kitni khoobsoorti se bayan kiya tumne is ARTH ko. great twist in the last line. hope you'll do better in the future
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i know thats your first triveni and you know maine bahut kam hi logon ki first triveni itni achhi dekhi hai..
Aisa kitni hi baar hota hai dhaai akshar ke maayne badal jate hain...aur kitni khoobsoorti se bayan kiya tumne is ARTH ko. great twist in the last line. hope you'll do better in the future
I want to say a lot.. but
I am speechless.
keep it up
GOD BLESS YOU
nice triveni...
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